For my first initial draft I wanted to focus mainly on the digital execution of each concept. The closer I got it to the final execution, the easier it would be for me to tweak it and finalize it. Although the colour and composition is a little dry, I focused on the smoothness of the movements and the comfort of readability.
In my final piece I focused on fleshing out the latter half with more concepts instead of just having it be type popping in on screen. Additionally, I tried to add a bit more character to each section by tightening up the animation and making things flow smoother.